Okay. After looking at the love poems u guys wrote... eww... hahas, jkjk. well, maybe this will help. i'll give some tips =)
Tips:
1) Have a romantic Tittle. ( Important to make people WANT o read it.)
2) Use soft words like white, calm, angel in the poem. ( Avoid Harsh words)
3) Be expressive. (express them as u wan to express in your heart.)
4) Use rhyme schemes.
5) the flow of words MUST be good. ( for example: I love you, i hope you feel the same way too...)
6) use ' ...' to show you have not expressed enough, because your expressions are unlimited. showing your ' love'
7) be REAL.
8)create the image and atmosphere with excellent choices of words. for examples : Dreams, light, hope, clouds etc.
9) write the poem when you are FEELING that way. so, if ur sad or unhappy, dont write a love poem, it will turn out to be negative.
10) Be POSITIVE in your poem.
11) MOST IMPORTANT!!!! SO SECRETIVE THAT I WILL ONLY SHARE WITH MY TRUE FRIENDS. MSN ME AND I WILL SHARE. ANYONE, I PROMISE THAT THIS IS THE BEST TIP AND ANY GAL WILL LOVE THE POEM.
okay, hahas, the tips. =), hope all of you will have a succesful relationship.
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